Rough Cut (v1) + Feedback - Commercial

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Rough Cut (v1) + Feedback


https://youtu.be/E1ekCJ2a0IU






    Quoted Feedback:

  • "It's very funny and entertaining."
  • ''Some of the dialogue was delivered possibly a bit too quick and could've been slowed down."
  • "Great natural chemistry between the actresses."

    Self Reflection: 
  • I could've been on screen more.
  • I could have been a bit more helpful with making sure we stayed fully on track (Ex. not eating all the candy before the ad was completed).
  • I could've been a bit more expressive with my facial expressions in the commercial.

    To-Do List:
  • Try to find ways to improve audio quality.
  • Review full rough-draft to make sure all edits are optimal.
  • Review decisions to make sure we are satisfied with editorial choices.






 

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